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Question: Does anybody like the poem that I wrote!? Opinions Please!! (:!?
Ok!. It's kinda sketchy I wrote it during school and it was fast!.!.!.But here it is!.!.!.
I just don't know what happened
I thought you were the one
You were everything that I wanted
And everything that I thought we could be!.
But I guess we lost it
I'm done with denying that I miss you
Because it's true that I do
But I know it can't work between us,
And that I can't be with you!.!.!.
I know it doesn't really have an ending, so if yall could think of one, feel free to post it, but don't forget to give opinions on it! (:
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ending with "the feeling kills me"!?
i love it! and i totally agree that it could be a songWww@QuestionHome@Com
no offense but it kinda sounds like the lyrics to a song that taylor swift or hannah montana would sing
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The emotion is wonderful, keep messing with this one!.
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It isn't exactly to my taste, but I think it's a pretty good poem!. I can definitely relate to it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
sounds pretty kewlWww@QuestionHome@Com