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Question: Asking opinions about my poem!. What do you think!?
End of Our Road!?
October, 2006
People say one can love two
How!? With only one heart!?
Your heart is with him, not with me
I deserve to be loved
Wholly and completely
Why did we play out this drama!?
Would it please me!?
Would it please you!?
Only to realize the value of what we had!?
Surely not for me anyway
Our kingdom has fallen
The flowers have died
The beach stretches out
The wind blows strong
Shall this bud a friendship!?
I suppose time will tell
You are free my beloved
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It ends rather abruptly, unless that is what you were going for, then hey, great ending!. Overall, I thought it was good!. But, forgive my ignorance, what in the world does " The beach stretches out " mean!? Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful, and I'm sorry!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com