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Question: Please give an opinoin on another poem of mine!.!.!.!?
I've copyrighted them, and looking to get them published!. Looking to see which ones you like before I do!

Obsession

The boundaries of love,
Are so incomplete!.
The lines of compassion,
Sometimes bittersweet!.
But in love sometimes ecstasy,
Feels so complete!.
Don't know the boundaries!.
You say that you want her!.
Your savior, your lover!.
But her love's like a poison,
And it slowly seeps!.
Through your heart, to your mind,
As your spirit depletes!.
OBSESSION!.!.!.
This disease in you it infests!.
You're filled with such sadness,
Your life you detest!.
You will not doubt!.
You're a shell of a man!.!.!.
All hope you're without!.

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