What do you think of this poem I wrote? Might be kind of dark.?

Question: What do you think of this poem I wrote!? Might be kind of dark!.!?

A glass rose is fragile like my heart, you drop it and it shatters into a million tiny piece's that cannot be fixed!.
And it bleeds, it bleeds!. And I will not Love no more!.
Not one more chance Because I cannot find myself to Love,
Be mended, then Broken again!.

I can just be sitting here and have idea's floating in my head xD!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Its so lovely !.!.!.

A glass rose is fragile like my heart, spurned, cast aside
it shatters into a million, tiny, irreparable piece's!.
And it bleeds, it bleeds!. And I will Love no more!.
Not one more time, perchance will I be led to Love,
To mend in your hands only to break once again!.

so many connotations can be derived from it !.!.!.
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I like it!. And ya know what!? It is "dark," but not like, "Holy mommy--I need to go watch films about puppies for 2 days" dark!. Certainly a "I'm scared, I'm lost, I'm hurting" kind of thing!.

I'd play with line breaks for a bit more emphasis!. Especially with

And it bleeds,
it bleeds!.

and

Be mended
then broken again

See what difference that makes with the flow and the impact!? Just some thoughts!.

Nicely done!.!.!.keep it comin'!Www@QuestionHome@Com