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Question: Any body been in this situation!?
Every second I look at a glass of wine,
I think about you every time!.
Your drunken, staggering, bouts!.
My love having many years of doubts!.
Even though I left I somehow always come back!.
But your sitting there with another 12 pack!.
You promise every time that you will change,
but you still hit me if I am in range!.
You say your sorry and that you will quit,
I shouldn't have believed you again one bit!.
I cant help house all your drunken friends,
Are relationship has a scar that will never mend!.
You were the only one for me when I met you!.
You have changed so much, from when you use to say that too!.
I am leaving now never to come back,
you wont ever see me again after I pack!.
I am saying my good buys now,
Because I cant face you somehow!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's depressing!. But you can find many people in situations like this with a different appearance and sometimes the exact way!. It's unfortunate, but some people make the wrong decision because they fell for a disguise rather then who they truly were!.

It sounds like you lost your love for them because of what they've become!. They keep making up lies to try and make you feel better, but they never come true and you keep realizing they never will!. You realize he's using you and you're losing your love for him as life goes on!. Because you realize how horrible he's become!. Although he was once a great person and as he lies you believe he may become that person again!. Although he hasn't and won't unfortunately!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is such a sad place to be especially when your so emotional into the other person!. I had similar relationships, because I refused to break the abusive cycle of the drinking and their abuse, that only a family member could rescue me out by literally putting foot in this man's butt!. I admire your strength, there is nothing to miss in a relationship like your except more misery and pain, fly with your heart and mind in tact true will surface for you, perhaps with even a fairy tale ending!.
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Not bad!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.but:
First:if you want to write,make sure you have a good knowledge of the use of the English language!.
Then: not bad as a first attempt!. I can feel your pain,your difficult relationship with a hopeless man!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

Promising!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poet of the night
In your words
I detect a bite

Instead of trying to nurture and teach
You push some people out of reach
WHO made you God and Tyrant over
The ones who ask for help, moreover!?

*Shake my head*Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've been in this situation; however, you should check your spelling and grammar before posting this for everyone to read!. I hope everything works out for you!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

rhyme seems corny with such serious subject matter!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

In the position of writing really bad prose!?

Nope, haven't been in that position for a while!.

Did you mean writing really melodramatic prose!?

Can't say I'm guilty of that either!.

Maybe you're talking about the poor grammar that leaps out at educated readers like a clarinet squeaking in the middle of a solo (see that, that's called a metaphor!. They're important to poetry)

Nah, not guilty of that either!.

So the only thing left is the content of your really bad prose piece!.

Which also, I've never been in!. But my suggestion is you stop wasting time trying to write poetry without understanding the rules of it, and focus on starting a new life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com