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Question: Please critique poem for Zoo Keeper!?
Oh Zoo Keeper,
How I love you!
Let me count the ways!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
1 Banana
2 Banana
3 Banana
FOUR!
Eat banana now,
Leave peel by the door!.
When time for you to bathe me,
I do the booga dance!.
You trip on the peel;
make me laugh till I pee my pants!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I LOVE this poem! You have rediscovered your sense of fun! This is an extremely good sign!.!.!.!.monkey keepers bathe their monkeys!.!.!.and dress them!? Where do I sign up!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good for a monkey in a human suit, except you don't wear any pants to pee in!. This need not detain us as I for one am willing to suspend disbelief when it comes to monkey poetry!.

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Quite contemporary!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Me love funny pme thing!. NOt like last line!. Pee good, but pants unmonkey!. Kinda wonky!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

For a monkey not bad, for a human it needs work!. Good job monkey man!. Www@QuestionHome@Com