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Question: What say to digging up bones and burning them!?


Trowel Time

Here today
Gone forever
Price I pay
For saying never
Words of hope
Said by two
Knotted rope
Screamed I do
Over exposed
Spells cast
Pictures posed
Poisoned past
Traveling light
Secret places
Internal plight
Dueling faces
Midnight missed
Finally free
Last lost kiss
Where is she

?rad102008
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is what happens when you let the avatars treat you like real people, and vice versa!. You've got your guts all twisted up over imaginary relationships, unless you're going to go dork all 57 of them!.

You have had months to better your craft for an upcoming book, all you've done is blurt out, successfully haranguing an editor who could hold you back!.

Instead, why don't you read a few of the books I've been suggesting!? "War and the Poet" Eberhart/Rodman will open your eyes!.

I still consider you to be one of the talented people on this site!. You need to grow out of the vapor and turn back into a real person!.

I'm just trying to help!.

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I hope I didnt miss the meaning but what I got from it was a marriage that went real bad and ended with someone leaving suddenly!.!.!.!.or perhaps lost in another way!.!.!.!.!.either way it was good!.!.the last line had a great sense of hopelessness to it

sorry if I missed it totallyWww@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it, so do you have a book published or in the making!? where can I buy it, if ya do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very sad images, strong images!. As always, good writingWww@QuestionHome@Com

I am in tears over all of this, and that's not a lie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

she is never lost!. she is in view!. waiting on you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com