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Position:Home>Poetry> Are dreams really worth remembering ?Question: Are dreams really worth remembering !? quiet dale shrouded by mourning fog solitary mighty oak stands alone in silent vigil, waiting, marking time another changing of season has arrived boughs beaten by strife, yet unbowed testing impossible everlasting strength ignoring truth, daily waiting, hoping an unforgotten angel’s figure to again emerge he has trod a worn, winding, questing path a figure scared by time, nearly unknown to all soul denuded, striped bare of autumn cloaks no breeze shall disturb weary slumber dreams an autumn day like this, so very long, long ago gloriously misty, peacefully still with chill she came to him along the path, smiling took his hand, led him from the oaken shadows she spoke of dreams without fears joys, possibilities of living a life to come unlocking chains, cold bindings of his soul holding him with her warmth through chilled night day's first light found her arising, leaving nary a whisper nor look, quietly she stole away each day at dusk he walked to this spot her promise recalled, engraved within his soul alone in the dark, he waited for her return sighing, settling down beside the mighty oak he spoke often as if she was there he heard her musical replies in the breeze fifty-eight spent years, waiting, never yielding sorrow held at bay from memories of long ago sixteen years now, the dreamer was laid to rest beside the feet of the mighty oak, waiting Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i am just now reading poetry!. this one puts happiness and sadness in me at one time!. dreams are meant to be remembered if they are for the memories of time past!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Dreams are most definitely worth remembering, even other peoples!. I try to paint dreamscapes all the time with little to no success--THIS was dreamy (and I don't mean dreamy as in Damsel McDreamy but as in so surreal it WAS real!.) A very good pen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well written,very nice! Dreams for Me are in fact worth remembering,as long as they bring Me joy! If they bring sorrow then I"d wait till tomorrow!Www@QuestionHome@Com Beautifully written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sounds like a spirit of the Oak!. You are a marvelous painter with words!. Please never stop your canvases! Good Morning!Www@QuestionHome@Com i like the way you wrote this TS!. and ya, i love remembering some dreamsWww@QuestionHome@Com |