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Question: Harumph!. Where did you keep your stash!?
Rushing through simple
stick structures
he bleeds a bit on his way
up the mountain that is only
a hill
the brown dog trotting as a soldier
in his wake he leads him
towards the stash!.
The sun is going to be
in the sky forever
today!.

He opens the pages slowly
the faded ink no match for the woman
with the solemn smile
the cover glaring red and black
HOOTERS AND HOOCH
he's agog
he looks towards the clearing
his sentry on watch as he unfolds his youth
and spills his lust
on the pine cone
floor!.

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(That is an absolutely disgusting visual!.)
I never thought to bring my dog as a look out--that could have saved so much embarrassment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

quite powerful well penned verse! I didn't take it lightly, because it is not superficial!. Well chosen words for well picked images, seen as the years go by!.
Rushed into the mountain (accumulation) of past events, unfolded them (open the pages), yet carefully (his sentry on watch) reliving (his youth) again through his own stash (unknown to others)!. That is his only way as an old man (faded ink) to be a match for a woman!.
The flow was almost like silence!
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Never had anywhere to hide a stash!.9 of us,plus granny,in a 3-bed-roomed house will tell you why!.Had to visit friends stashes for my education!.
You have my admiration for being able to write about anything and make it come (no pun intended) alive!.I definitely won't be collecting pine cones this Christmas!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Playboy magazine!? Just a wild guess lol!. Stash is meant for nobody to see so I would have to say the safe that is hidden!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you are knowing in the ways of man!. i won't say where my stash is!. you will look for it and take it away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That one hit close to home, brother man!.
The mountain was a building, and the clearing was
a roof!. I was there!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sausage Sunrise with eggs over easy! Stashes did abound!. I think Mothers always knew though, just never commented!. Good poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

poor dog, poor boy, poor pine cone floor!.!.!.!.!.poor ma,
she had to cover her eyes at this vivid image!

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I hope you at least washed your hands before you submitted this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The Attic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dang dude!. This is a very sexual tone here!. Good stuff, among your very best, I must say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

stupid dog!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I hide mine very well and no one knows where!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

we've got ourselves a situation here!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's all!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.in my empty head!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'd love for my parents to find my stash!. Heavens would gel!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I keep mine in a Dr!. Brown's tin which is buried under my Zany tree!Www@QuestionHome@Com