No Fear
You fire-grilled slab of greased pig!
I will destroy you with my man mandibles
and by force of hunger
you will become
me
and I will lick
my swollen lips
in glorious
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You fire-grilled slab of greased pig! I will destroy you with my man mandibles and by force of hunger you will become me and I will lick my swollen lips in glorious victory!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I give it a 32 !.!.!. you made me sooo hungry!. Save me some!. I'm getting my bib and I'll be there in 15 minutes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "and by force of hunger you will become me " When the verse is very delicious, this becomes a Writer-Reader dialogue!. In combat its its a War-Soldier dialog!. In politics!.!. In Wall Street!.!.Etc!. All the above and vice versa because of "you will become me" Powerful stuff, peculiarly rated at 26! Www@QuestionHome@Com Waiting Miss Muffet Wilted on her Toughette While the spider lingered by Wringing ate spiked shoe feet Wrought worry in her eyes!. The spider glided down perch in her hair and whispered Now what's in the bowl you dish!? 26 eyes darted eyelids parted 13 pairs on a platter A platter of gold The bowl broken at her feet Www@QuestionHome@Com And this little piggy went ",WEE,WEE,WEE,WEE,WEE,WEE" All the way home!. That made me laugh, "WEE,WEE,WEE" OOPS!!! Since there are 10 little piggy`s you get a 10/10Www@QuestionHome@Com At least a 20! Add a steamed bun with poppy seeds, mustard, no ketchup, celery salt, pickle, relish and hot peppers plus delivery and I will give you a 26 for sure!Www@QuestionHome@Com 12 maybe 13, nice laugh though thanks!. My favorite was "You fire-grilled slab of greased pig!" Great!Www@QuestionHome@Com Seeing how it is 625AM here,and it made me run,not walk to the fridge,To fry up a slab o bacon! I give it a 25,and say that You owe me one!! (lol)Www@QuestionHome@Com Ooh, you are awful, But I like you! lol 26, purely or not so purely, Because of the clever play of words!. Now why am I thinking of a Large Saveloy right now!?Www@QuestionHome@Com 27 You went and made a poem about a critic of Rosie O'Donnell when she is making her way through a buffet line like a buzz saw through wood and ruining it for anyone left behind her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I gotta go with Catz on this!.!.!. then Sister's "tard" aside!. 26 for finally gettin' a flipping laugh on this place today!!!!!!!!!!!! my eternal thanks!. maWww@QuestionHome@Com you get a 25 for a great representation of a Maori warrior at a breakfast bar, aren't you serving coffee this morning!?Www@QuestionHome@Com The hidden last line is "and belch like yo Momma wuz callin' you" 25 for not having that last line in place!. shame on you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com 17 funny and creepy but not great!. can you look at this one!? http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wow! There is power in this!.!.!.not only funny! A new slant on things is always welcome, and you did it righteously! 26+ Good morning!Www@QuestionHome@Com 42 the answer is always 42Www@QuestionHome@Com 25 Only because pork ribz on a grill is such an art, that they are so often hit-and-miss!. Write a short story about beer and I'll give you a 41!.Www@QuestionHome@Com 17 just a good number for such a good poemWww@QuestionHome@Com Very sexy! 27+Www@QuestionHome@Com Geesh! What happened to your avatar!? it looks like a sausage in a bun with mustard! You better get something to eat man! They say, you are what you eat! 19Www@QuestionHome@Com 10, not a very high rating!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's bacon and eggs for me this morning!. You get a 26 if I don't burn the bacon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I give it a 26 and it made me hungry as all heck!. Now share that pig roast!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com A definite 26!. Big pig roast is in order!Www@QuestionHome@Com 26! That was HOT in a sick sort of way! I need a cold shower now!!Www@QuestionHome@Com 12Www@QuestionHome@Com 62Www@QuestionHome@Com 23 5/8 +/- 2% Www@QuestionHome@Com OMG, you did it, you really did it !.!.!. you went and barbecued Oprah!Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh!.!.!.a nice ad for KC Masterpiece BBQ Sauce ! It's a 25!.5 Who wants ribs !? I have an extra one!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Save me the skin!.!.!.I'm a pro at makin cracklin's!.!.!. Rating= 52, a full deck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This poem made me a horny little fairy!. 26 I give to you!. Love honeyWww@QuestionHome@Com |