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Caught in My Mind


To your magnetic aura I yield
When you're near me in your manly appeal!.
My knees get weak, my palms get sweaty,
It's so hard to keep this heart of mine sealed!.

I've known you since a long time ago!.
When you and I were but a lass and lad!.
Not once did it ever cross my mind
That I would ever want you so bad!.

Although your hard body and muscles of stone
Draw me into the likes of you
I should make a move, I know
But it's something I can't force myself to do!.

The uncertainty that flows throughout my body
Holds me steadfast against my will!.
Though every muscle in me, every bone
Aches to touch you, to feel your thrill!.

Man, you are just so damn sexy!
You cannot fathom just what it is you do to me!.
There just is no reason to beg!.
I will come to you willingly!.

Awaken my senses, heighten my plight!.
Titillate me in passionate delight!.
Come to me, make love with me tonight!.
With those large hands, I know you'll do me right!.

Let's connect and together
Perform love's age-old dance!.
My goodness, what I would do to you
Had I only the chance!.

I am pure, so be kind
Relax and unwind!.
For, until we meet, and forever post
You will be caught in my mind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is very erotic writing and that is not bad in and of itself!.
It needs for each stanza to be the same meter!. you have tossed that rule aside!. Might want to rework for that reason alone!. Don't forget your punctuation to help with your meter and what you are trying to say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you have a good base, but here are some suggestions: lose the rymes, poems are better when they dont rhyme; use more symbolism; and be more descriptive
its good, though!Www@QuestionHome@Com