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Why Birds Fly

Once I had a life, I lived!.
I smiled, I laughed, I had plenty to give!.
Until the darkness took me over one day
And left no room, no space, no leeway!.
The coldness spread throughout my soul!.
It bit, it scarred me, and left no console!.
It asphyxiated my air and blinded my eyes!.
It blocked it's ears and drowned my cries!.
It tossed me into a never ending abyss!.
I tried to grab hold, but everything, I missed!.
I feel my heart racing the blood to my brain!.
Being buried alive under dirt, or left in the rain!.
Gagged and chained to a blood-stained wall!.
No one will lend a hand as I free fall!.
If only I had a pair of golden wings!.
If only I could remember all the good things!.
For now, I can only guess just why birds fly!.
They take their troubles, and cast them to the sky!.
One day I hope to emerge from the gloom!.
Sadly, that day won't be any day soon!.
I used to have faith in the choices I made!.
Now I hate myself in this imaginary grave!.
Time is not my friend, she's not on my side!.
Time took me away, and smothered my pride!.
The dark and the cold dictate my life now!.
I've got to escape someway, somehow!.
It's got a good grip, it's tightening it's hold!.
If only I were like the brave and the bold!.
I jump, for the exact same reasons why birds fly!.
To cast away my troubles, and finally say goodbye!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Veryyy nice !. i love it :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

OMG! that's so good!. I love poetry and i think that this is AMAZING! My favorite poem ever in by Robert FrostWww@QuestionHome@Com

um wow thats pretty good! Www@QuestionHome@Com