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Position:Home>Poetry> Is this attempt at a death poem plausible? It's meant to be like a 'jiseQuestion: Is this attempt at a death poem plausible!? It's meant to be like a 'jisei', ie!. Japanese death poem!? "Tall grass swaying in the breeze!.
A moment, passing like my presence!." It's meant to feel like my life was just a flash, like seeing the grass sway in the breeze so easily but returns to stillness when the wind stops!. Wind does not blow for long, just as my existence!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I comprehended that well for so few words, I think your attempt was quite successful :)Www@QuestionHome@Com it's pretty good!.!.!. i have no words left to say!.!.!.:DWww@QuestionHome@Com |