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Question: How do you like this poem/life story!?
This isn't one of tose rhyming poems!. I can't make my life rhyme!. My life is rythmless without my love!. Here's the story/poem:


Room 7

Room 7 is my dream room
All of my most treasured memories lie in there
When I revisit I still see my memories about my love
I see the both of us reenacting my wonderful life stories
I see her smiling talking about things that made us come here
I see my friends talking and dancing our cheer moves
I see us dancing after snack
I see us laughing and smiling
I see me staring at my love every second
I see me uncontrollably writing his name down on my work
I see her talking to me when I ask her to check something
I see the whole class whining about me moving
I see the class, eating, chatting laughing on my last day
I see my love hugging me, not knowing I still love him to this day
I see my friends, writing their numbers and hugging me for a long time saying their last words to me, goodbye
It pained me to hear that once more but I continued looking
I see me hugging and looking at my empathetic teacher for the last time
I see myself, leaving the classroom, taking one last look at it
It ends there
My life story ends with one step out the door
Finally, I see myself crying, starting at these memories that will always be with me, but will never leave Room 7
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it's a wonderful story/poem!!! *sniff*

it made me cry!.!.!. i hope i would be like that(someday)

Btw, keep it up!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I remember Room 7 also!. I stood outside my old school tonight and looked up at room 7, which I first entered when I was 7, funnily enough!. True!. Sadly, they're going to demolish the building in a few years, but I'll always remember Room 7!.

Anyway, in line 5, shouldn't 'her' be 'him'!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

mm!.!.!. =|

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