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Question: How is my poem!? It is called Scream!?
Driving drunk in your car,
Me sitting in the back

Unable to ever sober up,
Whatever good there was in you gone,
Long before I lived

Injustice for all is law in you domain,
Hatred boils in me!.!.!.

Like a bottle going to pop,
Sitting on the bus,
looking out the window!.

What if I came to you with a hammer!?
Smash it down on bone!? Again and Again
Screaming!.!.!.

I am back on the bus
**** all this poetry crap

Words are only substitues for feelings
When you change the way you look at things
The things you look at change

Driving in Your car
Me in the back seat

You keep driving!.!.!.
In the end drunk drivers only take peoples lives
To compensate for the rotton one hell will be recievingWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow thats good you sold get it publeshed i cold be populer one dayWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's neat!. I like the idea, but where
the line breaks are distract me from the meaning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!.!.!.
You should be in a f*cking heavy metal band!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is jazzy stuff, like the attitude, backseat driving and a mind like that!.!.its very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com