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Question: What does Groundhog day mean to you!?
His guts to the forest floor,
a single shot !.22 rifle
perched with an arch
on the husk of a cottonwood branch
he waits and watches!.

Twenty yards away a Groundhog tumbles
through the hot rock bottom
of a southern creek!.
He crawls ahead
using his knees to paddle
the distance
he's ten yards closer now
and hears the growl of dissent
from behind him!.
"Whatcha ya gunna do now, boy!?"
The woodsman is standing firm
on his rifle
the one his grandfather gave him
the stalk ground into the dirt
the barrel in trouble
the trigger buried
the torn boot holding his weapon down!.
"Well, if you don't get
your gahdamned boot
offa my gun,
I'm gunna kill ya!."
He raises his hidden pistol
from his waistband and sits up!.
The man with the boot drops his face
like water from a wooden cup
and slowly steps off the rifle!.
"I was just foolin'"
"Well, I ain't"

He watches as the man
slowly becomes the background
and he thinks about his children
and their hunger
and their innocence
and he turns and shoots,
the groundhog frozen in the heat
for a moment,
then fallen!.

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Very good! I like to hear the rest of the story!. Guess the woodsman wont be foolin with him again soon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's my son's dad's birthday!. I used to cry because my son could remember his birthday because it's on Groundhog Day!. My little boy would call his dad to say happy birthday and his dad would brush him off or not answer the phone!. Very sad to explain to a 6 year old why his dad didn't have time to talk to him!. :(

Great poem BTW!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"frozen in the heat," LOVED that line!

And Ground Hog Day is my birthday, was my sister's and is my grandson's!.!.!.!.!.so it means a day of life's celebration, not quite the sentiments of your moving story!.

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This story/poem is filled with expressions illustrating ambivalent emotion!. This is the Human Condtion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You leave that little ole groundhog alone now!. Don't taste good no how!. See, got me thinking of hunting season which is small game now!. Very good one here!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

This story reminds me of my dad, who hunted wild game for the family!. He never brought home a groundhog, but lots of squirrels and rabbits!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

A man's got to do what a man's got to do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you do what you gotta do to feed your kids!. A compelling drama and the outcome not known till the very last!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I live in a nice village!.

Groundhog means Bill Murray!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The real question is: did he see his shadow!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i read some of it and it sounds good but i couldnt be bothered to read it allWww@QuestionHome@Com

i see food is on the mindWww@QuestionHome@Com

Nice poem!. Draws or paints an interesting picture of need vs angerWww@QuestionHome@Com

poor lil groundhog!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We do Not Get that in SA
i am afraid But Good poem nonetheless
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Nice one ELAINE!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it means i'm having a saladWww@QuestionHome@Com