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Question: Would you comment on this poem, about an unexpected visitor!?
Surprise Visitor
by C!.S!. Scotkin
I should have known
or had a clue
cats two stepping
on the porch,
playing Baryshnikov
chairs to table
dizzying pas de deux,
I should have guessed!.
Screech! warblers hoarse from joy,
squirrelly Tarzans
without vines land on tinny roofs
ducks weave and shuffle
their own parade, kazoo sounds
to greet their twinkly pond
throwing back the sun’s first rays,
Here, catch!
I should have known!
North wind stole away
a high latitude
chilled pitcher,
poured great draughts on my world,
crisp and cold
thirst for Autumn,
quenched!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is so good in so many ways!. Well-seasoned as I am, I could easily Fall for you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
For me, this is the best you've written!.
I think a poem can be like a person!.!.!.you immediately warm to it, and relate to it and it fulfills a need in you!.!.!.other poems can be equally as worthy, but like with a person, you don't quite click!.!.!.!.!.
This suits me perfectly!.
It has such lovely touches!.!.!.'playing Baryshnikov'!.!.!.squirrelly Tarzans/without vines'!.!.!.!.throwing back the sun's first rays!./Here, catch!'!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I had better stop or I will simply be re-producing the whole poem!.
I love it!. It's going in my files - now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very nice love this part!.!.!.kazoo sounds
to greet their twinkly pond
throwing back the sun’s first rays,
Here, catch!
I should have known!
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Very cute!. The animals always know first!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
And you said it was November before you felt Autumn! lol A fun read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
What a delight!.Looking for more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very tasty to the mind!. What a joyous poem! May we have another!?Www@QuestionHome@Com