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Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think,,,is indecision a decision,,, or fickle fate ?Question: What do you think,,,is indecision a decision,,, or fickle fate !? questioning gaze seeking, wondering, from across the way caught, quickly averted eyes turned down courage summoned peeking shyly then lingering too long wisp of a smile glimpsed quickly turning back cheeks burning my mind reeling imagination inflamed powerless to act questions throbbing answers sought risking exposure hope raging searching not in vain her back turned shoulders sagging steps shuffling chance wasted Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: To answer your q!.!.!.I think it can be both!. if I'm undecided and the decision gets made for me by another before I can stop it!.!.!.!.fate has dealt me an injustice!. Now to your poem, I like this!. It speak eloquently of something we all have experienced!. I do think you should have gone n tapped her shoulder though!Www@QuestionHome@Com That is one though question! If indecision is a fickle fate, how about lousy decision that 'd rip apart the entire society, or just oneself!? We may regret (or be contented with) some decisions we 'd made as much as those we hadn't made!. When the results are in favor, we link the decision to our high IQ etc; otherwise, we 'd be looking for an escape goat, and fate is always there to take the blame, so to speak, and that is a our fickle fate!. As for the poem, Its a nice read!The wording is very well stated, but flow takes a different form, its not smooth, almost each line has a pulse of its own, like (a clock) ticks!. And it was perfect for the theme!. Thanks for sharing! Www@QuestionHome@Com I do not know the answer to that question but you have described a 17 - 20 year old girl living in a sheltered environment in the '70s not sure about the guy but I think it is dead on!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A poem that could be a metaphor for male adolescents the world over! Poignant and well written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Dunno!.!.!.I used to be indecisive, but now I'm not so sure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |