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Question: What think you of this short poem!?
I am
but a kiss away
from euphoria,
Yet miles away
from understanding love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The miles can be a joyous adventure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

There is no way to understand love, my friend!. Understanding is an intellectual process, done under mind/brain control!. Love, OTOH, is an emotional process under the control of heart!.
Live your love and don't try to (pale) it by trying to understand it!.!.
Those 5 lines are perfect, the way they are, conveying a moment of truth with oneself!.
10/10!
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Should you ever understand love, you will be the first!. In that case, you can start writing on the multiple volumes it will take to explain it to the world, and unfortunately you may not have time to finish before the end of time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It speaks the absolute truth in only a few short lines!. I swear you could make a living at being a poet!. You are the best on this site!. Your words speak concisely and aim right at the heart!. You are honest and truthful and pure!.
Peace & Love :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is Wonderful
(as a poor earthly soul can be)

Edit:
TD's the Best Answer !!! Oh, or "latj", or "Danial" !?!?!? What do you think!?
And was TD journeying somewhere or have I just missed his/m (Answ!.s)!?

Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think the gap shortens
of understanding love
by receiving that kiss!.!.!.
and providing some!.

i see the euphoria part is fiqured out!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I really liked this!.
"Short" but oh how so very true!. And as Dmag said, the journey awaits!.
One never knows if one will ever reach that understanding!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is good!. I think you can do without the word, "love!." Just leave us hanging out there, euphoric and all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

short and sweet!. love is very hard to find the lasting equal kind of love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, very different gem from you tonight! But it shines!.
You understand love, Semper!. Your words show it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I disagree with the Captain!. I think 'love' is necessary to let the reader know you didn't mean, say, 'lust!.'
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One will never fully understand love as it is constantly changing and rearranging itself!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just don't kiss me! lol TD has a good point on 'love' at the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love the way the word "euphoria" sounds in this poem!. Very nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good KudosWww@QuestionHome@Com

some truth to that short poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

you sound like a typical marine to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thumbs up ! One of your best!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you are kind of crazyWww@QuestionHome@Com

What DMag said nailed it!!!
He ROCKS!
(so did your pen)

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