Will you add a stanza, because I asked nicely?

Question: Will you add a stanza, because I asked nicely!?

Staying Warm On A Cold Night (DPM!.!.!.!.!.)

Immediate fandango
chilly little stars
pumping blood
to brain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Immediate fandango
chilly little stars
pumping blood
to brain!.

In the air, hints of mango
No dance quite like ours
Our hearts thud
Again

*if you wanted to, you could change the last line to something like "old/new pain" or "In Spain"

I hope this helps!. Your fist stanza is really quite intriguing!. Vurry noice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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STANZASby Edgar Allan Poe1827

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How often we forget all time, when lone
Admiring Nature's universal throne;
Her woods–her wilds–her mountains–the intense
Reply of HERS to OUR intelligence! [BYRON, The Island!.]
I
In youth have I known one with whom the Earth
In secret communing held–as he with it,
In daylight, and in beauty from his birth:
Whose fervid, flickering torch of life was lit
From the sun and stars, whence he had drawn forth
A passionate light–such for his spirit was fit-
And yet that spirit knew not, in the hour
Of its own fervor what had o'er it power!.
II
Perhaps it may be that my mind is wrought
To a fever by the moonbeam that hangs o'er,
But I will half believe that wild light fraught
With more of sovereignty than ancient lore
Hath ever told–or is it of a thought
The unembodied essence, and no more,
That with a quickening spell doth o'er us pass
As dew of the night-time o'er the summer grass!?
III
Doth o'er us pass, when, as th' expanding eye
To the loved object–so the tear to the lid
Will start, which lately slept in apathy!?
And yet it need not be–(that object) hid
From us in life–but common–which doth lie
Each hour before us–but then only, bid
With a strange sound, as of a harp-string broken,
To awake us–'Tis a symbol and a token
IV
Of what in other worlds shall be–and given
In beauty by our God, to those alone
Who otherwise would fall from life and Heaven
Drawn by their heart's passion, and that tone,
That high tone of the spirit which hath striven,
Tho' not with Faith–with godliness–whose throne
With desperate energy 't hath beaten down;
Wearing its own deep feeling as a crown!.
THE END

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Going with 7-5-3-2

Immediate fandango
chilly little stars
pumping blood
to brain!.

Dissipated wanton dance
spinning all around
bright strobe lights
can't tame!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Staggers in with first coffee; achem,

special someone by my side
pulls me tight,embracing
wraps my hands about his waist
warming numb cold fingers

limps back out for more coffee,!.!.g'morning (yawn)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Immediate fandango
chilly little stars
pumping blood
to brain!.

Away from the vein
i think ill go insane
playing this game
because its so lame!Www@QuestionHome@Com

They took it
and They took it away
while the fireflies were drunk
but!.!.!. they glowed

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.and they glowed more!.!.!.!.!.!.

and the fireflies laughed!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.for They are wretched beings!.!.!.!.!.
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I remembered that song we sang though
Those days are far away!.!.!.
With the rush
Brings pain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

cold carbonation
glass convected
winning
her birthday rounds!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Stimulating moonlight
brightens outlook
altering consciousness
and ever profane!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Waltzing the Tango
tiny guitars
strumming them backwards
hung over pain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nourished
soulful diatoms
coalesced in midstream
waters once froze boiled overWww@QuestionHome@Com

Anticipated ecstasy
funny little fingers
fluffing lace
of brides!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Afterwards a tango
warming up both hearts
beating in tandem
insane!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

hide under the downy quilt
hear astral notions
growing warm
with love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Expediently eating a mango
In a silly little car
With no hood
Driving in the rain Www@QuestionHome@Com

Indescribably sated
By the warmth
Of criminal
IntentWww@QuestionHome@Com

cleaning dusted past
warming stiffened bones,
fell once, walking tall
againWww@QuestionHome@Com

Hold Me close and tell Me how You feel,Tell Me love is real, Words of love You whisper soft and true!Www@QuestionHome@Com

and America wept
for Obama made promises
!.!.!.that he keptWww@QuestionHome@Com

Hey Stanza!.!.!.!.I welcome you with open arms!.!.!.!.xx

Told you i was thick with poetry!.!.!.!.!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com

If I think on this much longer though-
I think I'll go insane!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would if I could, but I can't so I shant!!

How was that!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

burning of the wood
keeping warm
blood flows freely
til it freezes ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

round and round in a whirl, fire burning inside , Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dance of stops and starts
from stars sparks flew
perfectly rehearsed steps
my mind felt, knew!.

maWww@QuestionHome@Com

de magnatize me!.!.
I ask you pretty please
Is this a disease !?
I rest!.!.!.now at ease
!.!.!.keep me warm
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i gaze in your eyes
find in my surprise
it warms my heart
so i don't want to departWww@QuestionHome@Com