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Question: Poem inspired by the song "Hanging by a Moment" by Lifehouse!. Comments and critique!?
All my life I've been searching,
For something that is real,
Never really knowing,
What it was I wanted!.

Living in the moment,
But always changing gears,
Decisively indecisive,
Holding on to anything I could grab!.

Fast forward was my speed,
Never taking time,
To see the seasons change,
Or see the truth inside!.

You came into my life,
Caught me off guard,
Opened my eyes,
Then walked away that fast!.

Now I'm chasing after you,
Trying to slow things down,
I see you smile,
And I know I've won the battle!.

Forgetting all I used to be,
I've fallen for you
I don't want to get up,
You are the one, that something that's real!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That's a really good poem! :D
I wish I could write something like that!.

And yeah, I agree that the rhyming would have changed it!.

Would you consider making it into a song!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh wow, I love it! And I love that song, too!. also, I know it might sound weird, but I like that you didn't rhyme!. If you had, it might have taken away some of the feeling!. Great job! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com