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Question: Is this a story about dumpster diving !.!. !?
The year 1980
Thin young thing
Found herself with child
Alone in her condition gratefully
The sperm donator terminated from contact

The mood hostile
Anger and Mistrust
Guided her every decision
Feeling the immensity in her womb
A child who would change her outlook forever

6 months gone
Home from work
Opens the fridge door
Where is her Doctor Pepper!?
Opens freezer Where is her chocolate ice cream
She opens her mouth wide in a silent deadly scream

Out the door
Smoke from ears
Visible to anyone looking
She approaches a dumpster full of boxes
She looks at her belly, then climbs in anyway
Boxes, She needs boxes must pack and run Far away



Hot July heat
Texas sweat drips
Wearing her dads boxers
The days becoming interminably long
Birthday comes passes, two days longer
Before child chooses to make an entrance

8 days late
Pale blue eyes
Suckles at mother’s breast
Soft blonde hair first granddaughter
Continuity and fulfillment fully realized
With the birth of tiny infant girl, to treasure
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Excellent words!.!.!.Perhaps, the best I've seen yet!.!.My applauds to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Feeling the immensity in her womb
A child who would change her outlook forever"

now there's a pair of lines that should be mandatory reading for every young lady once they hit 13, then 14, then 15, then 16, then 17, and again at 18

I read this three times just for the sheer joy of reading this most incredible poem of yours!.
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I like both answers so far!. Excellent reading!. Most important for any teenager I think is "opened refrigerator' "opened freezer!.' All empty!. To bad this couldn't become required reading for all teenagers!. It's a very powerful message!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yikes!. you captured me at that age!. and countless others!. Very powerfulWww@QuestionHome@Com