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Question: What do you first think of when you finish my poem!?
“Truth Be Told”

How can I say it!?
Can it be done!?
Is there a hope in the world!?
To dismiss this shun!?

An impassible bridge;
A room with no doors!.
A lock with no key;
Repelling with lures!.

Could you have guessed
That all I live for
Is to reveal something-
Just a bit more!.

I know how to do it,
But how can I start it!?
How can overcome
My mindless wit!?

Beyond my limits,
Among this cay;
A journey I travel
To get myself to say:

Oh, say, how I love you
And, say, how you don’t care!.
Oh, say, how I hate you,
And, say, how much love you share!.

Does this make sense!?
Can you understand!?
Or do I waste my time
In this faraway land!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A girl I have a crush on lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

longingWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think it meants baout being yourself
it was really good except i have no clue what 'cay' isWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's a badass poem dude!. I love it!.!.!. any chance can I put it on my myspace!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com