Drug poem drug poem drug poem ?

Question: Drug poem drug poem drug poem !?

THE WORLD WITH DRUGS

I envy you zoloft n prozac
you feel happy all around the clock

but you deserve it too
cause when im feeling blue
you die for me and face this fear

uplift me and my illness cures

you help a kid kill its tears

but the extacy is busy
tryna make people dizzy
it lies to all saying their ssri`s
many being fooled leaving them painful
the x only lives to give agony
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I envy you,
Zoloft and,
Prozac!.

You feel happy
All around
The clock!.

But, you deserve it too!.
Cause when I'm feeling blue,
You die for me and,
Face this
Fear!.

Uplift me,
And cure my soul!.

You'd help a kid
To kill it's tears

But the extacy
Is,
Busy!.
Try and make people dizzy

It lies to all as it whispers
Apalogys!.
Many being fooled are left in pain!.
The X only lives to give us sweet agony!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My first thought was that you need to fix the grammar before you post, but then I considered that as your grammar gets worse it is because of the drugs!.

The words or letters that you use in texting are not good enough for poetry; here you must write the correct word or be thought inadequate as a poet!.

n is not and; if a word requires an apostrophe, then put it in the word as in im -- I'm; Capitalize your proper nouns, you appear more educated (Zoloft, Prozac, I)!. Again, this critique may be completely out of place if you meant to show what drugs do to a person!. Do write more!.t!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i envy you!.!.
so in turn, i would not try to diss and make corrections!.
because i know that you're one hell of a poet!.!.!.
even without the medications!.Www@QuestionHome@Com