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Question: Where can you turn when you've been!.!.!.!?
turned in to a monster!?
I heard you said
I leaned mislead
In you confided
Soon since chided
For saying it straight
Said laying in wait
My words not slanted
Thoughts not recanted
Words of wanting
Turned now haunting
Ghosts cold and faceless
Acts old and tasteless
and somewhere in this place,
souls enter, in innocence,
unaware that amidst the words,
evils dart about, dressed in colors,
perched in boxes, with smiles and bad intent
In God we trust
everyone else is suspectWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This sounds as though you have been hurt deeply, or have perhaps inadvertently hurt another!. Either way, the pain is evident in poignant words!.!.!.!.!."Words of wanting, Turned now haunting"!. The reference to "perched in boxes" brings to mind these very avatars that are in "this place"!. Never give up on love, never cease to trust!. Otherwise , life becomes a cold and lonely existence!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
The halls are deep and cluttered I hear screams that are muttered!. I see blood smeared on all the walls, shotgun shells clutter the floor every night i hear screams of a new victem!. i see there faces as they pass my bars!. I see there pain but cannot feel it any more ex!.!.!.
Keep writing sounds great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like the poem that's a true thing and you just have to look up and ask GOD for forgiveness and you know go on with life accuratelyWww@QuestionHome@Com
good question !.!.!. I think I was asking the same thing last night!.!. only quite different words!.!. evil lives in my household!.!. just as you describe it and sometimes I become it!.
I think!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I don't believe in god, so I guess I am screwed all around!. :)
Nice piece, I can relateWww@QuestionHome@Com
I suspect you had a bad day when you wrote this piece!.Hope to-morrow is better!.Good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"with smiles and bad intent"!.!.!.!.sounds like most of the people I've ever met!.!.!.!.!.Good stuffWww@QuestionHome@Com
In God we do trust, but we don't always understand His ways!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
good rhyme scheme : ) is your question the title!? Www@QuestionHome@Com
cute one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
And so continues life's merry-go-round ride,
we still reach for the gold ring, my friend!.
maWww@QuestionHome@Com