Fire Mountain
Her cornucopia nearing full
She collected
Another red and orange deciduous day
Raking fire into mountains
And harvesting the sweet scent
Of sugar maples and red oak
To almost breathtaking
c? 10/17/08
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Her cornucopia nearing full She collected Another red and orange deciduous day Raking fire into mountains And harvesting the sweet scent Of sugar maples and red oak To almost breathtaking c? 10/17/08 Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Very interesting!.!. I keep rereading it to get its real feel and it shifts with every read!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com pretty good!.!.thought provoking!.!.!.!.on a scale of 1-5 I give you a 3!.5 Good job! Hope I helped! ~girl!.of!.existentialism!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's great!. My poetry will only afford me a violation, at best, so I won't tread there!. Certain types of mongers are not viewed as humorous by many, nor are dogs in the streets a verse after!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Excellent!. I had to read it 4 times, but got it on the 2d go!. 3 and 4 just to enjoy it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love it! I give it a 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com Cool but i like dark poetryWww@QuestionHome@Com |