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Question: Care to critique me poem =] !?
My heart is black
There’s no sun
In my world
I hear nothing
Except the silence
My mind is clouded
My vision is foggy
Every step I take
Is into darkness

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i love dark poetry!.
good job love!
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Short and sweet!. Love it!. Now, I know everyone pretty much hates these comments, but if a talented poet like yourself could check out my poetry, I'd be honored!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the poem is good
but i suggest that u see the bright side in every thing around u
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