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Question: Please read my poem, thanks!?


You could say I’m lonely,
Or that I’m insane
You could say I want to avenge
Winning the losing game
You could say you’re perfect
An angel, unprecedented allure
You could call yourself a saint
And your intentions are pure
You could say we’re opposites
That simply won’t attract
You could say we’re a metaphor
Of something less abstract
You could say I’m blunt,
But it just isn’t true
Because nature’s plan just doesn’t have
Me associated with you!.
You could say I hate you,
But “hate” is so cliché
I’d rather say I want you dead
For taking my life away!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Lol that's terrible

Way to much emotion!.!.

Emotion never does poetry any justice, it makes them all sound the same

Write something unique!.!.

Its only the content that sucks, its structured well i suppose!.!.

Still totally gay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I absolutely love this poem!. The flow is quite flawless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good one, i like it! (happy i am not the one!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

makes me cry!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.waahhhh!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.super!Www@QuestionHome@Com