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Question: I need a line for my poem please!!?
some that goes with:
'wear the darkness with an empty smile!.'Www@QuestionHome@Com


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It depends on the rest of the poem!. There are many lines that will fit any given situation!.
Try, 'to hide the bitterness and love destroying guile'
or, 'with empty heart making lost love vile'Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is not possible because we know nothing about the rest of the poem, what you intend your poem to say, what its structure is (free verse, blank verse, rhymed), etc!. I could write a simple poem with that as a semantic unit, but that would establish only my intent, and would be my poem!. Do you see!? Without a context, your question cannot be adequately answered!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

for you are only one for me for me for meWww@QuestionHome@Com

I would try a perpendicular line in this case!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

watching!.!.!. hoping!.!.!. please stay awhile!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

sorrow in my tears is in denialWww@QuestionHome@Com

you are the only one for me!.
this is what i hear in all songs!.(lol)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wear the darkness with an empty smile
I feel as if my bitter heart has been on trialWww@QuestionHome@Com