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Question: Help to improve this poem please!?
"Lion and Lamb"

I never thought these forces would meet much more than halfway
I never thought that my intentions would be simply tossed out of the mind
That he could show me the infinity emotions the human body is capable of

I’ve always imagined him choosing another soul
One that was the absolute opposite of cynical-
One that was alluring in every way possible-
Someone who blinded you by just the slight glance at
What could he see in me!?

As time elapses,
I see that each brief look at him triggers erratic heart beats
Every caress leads to intoxicating worlds in which only he and I are present
I see that our existence is the perfect combination of bliss, commitment, and pure
Affection
I realize I am in love!.

Look after my heart, old friend, I’m leaving it with you
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Triggers!. (Remove "I see that"!?)
infinity should be infinite!.
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I see that each brief look at him TRIGGERS erratic heart beats is correct

A really good poem

I can relate to it as something of this sort is happening to me nowWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is nice!

Did you make it!?

THIS IS NICE!

I'm sorry if I'm no help, I'm not blessed when it comes to poem, I'm just here to appreciate!

Keep It Up!

Just =D!.


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