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Question: "SURGEON GENERAL'S WARNING"!?
I work with surgical precision
Was the pass a decision!?
There are general perceptions of everything;
some warning, others scorning!.
A bike accident!.!.!. i couldn't see!.!.!.
With purpose, I raced into a log!.
I don't know what it was about the time!.!.!.
maybe, it was a way to find a break!.
when i removed myself from the ground, dirty,
tolls having been taken on an arm which i could barely lift,
air expressing it's gentle laughs at its gifts!.
Within 10-15 minutes the jury had spoken,
they assumed my arm was probably broken
a quick healer, maybe!.!.!. a breath of fresh air
it was like weight lifting, taking my jacket off
ending an act which was prescribed
I remember smoking a cigarette,
laying there, looking at the stars above,
laughing through my minor pain!.
!.!.!.the causes were unclear
I thought of the time of my birth!.
!.!.!.a Cancer, a dragon, if you will!.
( " he thinks of himself as 'a disease' " )
however, there are complications, still
!.!.!. he's just got emphysema!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Logged in, to see some racing into log,
And then the smog -- of a poem
Complications,
But with stars above,
Quick healing (Reiki!?),
Finally, peace: jury's verdict!
(a good one, with clinical precision!)
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Wow! I find your poem a bit funny but a bit serious too, it is like dreaminjg dreams and chasing rainbows! You are a better wordsmith than the other so-called poets!

Ah, "I remember smoking a cigarette!.!.!.
However, there are complications, still
he's just go emphysema!.!.!."

How appropriate, the memories of a remembering!.!.!.whatever that means!.

Congratulations, again!.

Good luck to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com