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Question: Is this poem any good!? Please read!?
Tied by disguised dictatorship
Behind a mask of love,
these words seem almost forced!.
Longing for the sweet music
of whispering pens to paper,
struggling against a gag of wrongly placed censorship!.
Fiery eyes claim words of mutiny,
but then again, why not overtake the weak!?
After all, poetry is "the game of the poor"!.
Walking dead on my feet
through a world of lies, I know this all too well,
where equations define rational,
and stanzas define insanity!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The poem is good, to a degree!. One, its hard to relate, i had to read it over twice!. and 2, it doesnt use the normal words that average people would associate with or even understand in this case!. Just trim down on the vocabulary and everything else is great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very very good poem!. I pretty bad at interpreting poems so please forgive me!. But it seems as though you r in love with a guy that is not treating you nice, right!? He obviously a bad guy and you know it but don't know how to get out!.

Can you critique my poem please!?

well you the one mentioned love!.!. it can be interpreted that wayWww@QuestionHome@Com

I would say this is a great poem for the ages of 14-19 year olds!.Www@QuestionHome@Com