It doesn't seem to flow right
First reaction!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Mortified
Quickly followed!.!.!.Betrayal
Introspection!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Truth Accepted
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First reaction!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Mortified Quickly followed!.!.!.Betrayal Introspection!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Truth Accepted Lesson learned!.!.!.!.!.I've survivedWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Form without content is impossible in a poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You have written nothing!. A trigee of course is a form that allows three bad poems to be constructed in a clever way, thus distracting the reader from the miserable content!. This however has no content!. It is a small mass of meaninglessness that cannot even receive the merit of having been made diverting by a technical circus!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Unfortunately, I am not the one to ask!. Elaine and TD and Reenie are the ones to question about the intriacies of the trigee!. However, this definitely passed in my book!. Good on you, with an uplifting message as well!. Survival is not necessarily healing, though!.!.!.perhaps a catharsis is still necessary in the end!. Blessed Be, Sweet SinWww@QuestionHome@Com I am NOT the one to ask regarding flow and form, not my strong suit!. However, it worked for me! Kind of like the steps of KublerRoss's grief, denial, anger, bargaining, depression, acceptance!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think the reader 'd expect more words!.However, its a good try, carrying your usual message!Www@QuestionHome@Com I would give this one a nod through to the next round!. ;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com 3 separate poems!. left side right side both sides Yes, you wrote a trigee Www@QuestionHome@Com no!.!.!. you didn't or!.!.!. did you!? yes!.!.!. a guess!. God!.!.!. bless me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |