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Question: My poem, To my army son, comments!?
You once were a boy
Who played with his toy
And now you’re a man
In a foreign land

You’re off to Iraq
We all want you back
It’s tour number two
What more can you do

And in my own mind
I know you are kind
But they just see you
Hardened like glue

I’ll be here when
We meet up again
And if you’re set free
Eternity

Love Dad
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That's just so awesome to have a dad like that!!! I think your poem is to awesome and it has truely came for your heart!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

you did good with the ryhmes
i like the rythemic devices and the meaning of your metaphorsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Nice poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it and i know how you feel my older sister will be going to Iraq soon
but this is only her 1st tourWww@QuestionHome@Com

I wish him Godspeed home to his family and the father who loves him dearly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What a thoughtful gesture!. I'm sure it will bring tears to his eyes!. Www@QuestionHome@Com