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Question: Are these poems gud!?!? (they arent that long)!?
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I see you,
Your far ahead
But still my fear you make me shed
Though I cannot feel you yet
I will soon with any bet!.

Words cannot describe how I feel!.
Please let this not be a dream,
Let this love be real!.
For the heartbreak I have endured
For my love I poured!.
Now it leaves me broken and shattered
My soul is deeply battered!.

They say better to love and lose
Then never love at all!.
But why should we live just to fall!?
When will life stop this abuse
And the world give up its daunting charade
And others that it may degrade!.

Repay the det owed
And let go of your load!.
Let the weary travelers of love rest
And all sleeping dogs lie
Because when it comes to your goodbye
Don’t think why
The world didn’t wait
As now its too late!.

and the second!.!.!.

Dream to dare and dream what others don’t seek
Seek to dare another dream that dares to dream!.
Dare to dream the dream that others seek
Seek the dream that others don’t dare!.

Dream yourself away from here
Fly yourself away from fear!.
Across the barren lake of infinity
Towards the beaming celestial city!.

Seek what your heart desires
Beyond the haggle and twist of buyers!.
Where the world cannot be bought or sold
Hearts are the only things made of silver and gold!.

Dare to let your mind take flight
Away from darkness into the light
Forever and ever this world shall turn!.
Our hearts and eyes, lies to burn!.


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help is greatly appreciated :] because people have fun thoughts lol

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