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I posted it before, but no one really commented!.




These nights haunt me, the stillness, and the
silence!.
On nights like this I remember her!.
I held her on nights like this!.
I held her before every kiss!.

I wanted to love her, maybe I loved
her!.
Those eyes twinkle, a silence lighthouse!.
They relieve and guide!. Maybe I loved
her!.

How could someone not love her!.
I wanted her to love me, maybe she loved
me!.
On silent nights like this I am reminded!.
The stars twinkle and shine!.

Maye If I held on!. But how to hold on to
something so precious!.
So strong, still so delicate!.
Maybe if I loved her then!.
Now I wouldn't be remembering!.!.

Still like cool air,
I needed in these lungs!.
These moments couldn't keep forever!.
She was there, but I never had her!.
Then having to release her!.

The stars beacon and twinkle!.
On silent nights like this I am reminded!.

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