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Question: How's this poem guys i wrote it and i am truthfully god damn 13 years old!?
THE REFLECTION OF ME
amongst the midst of the mountains
in the spring of the fountains
i saw a girl ever beautiful
the experience was wonderful
her hair like cascade flowed till the ground and started to fade
i asked god "give her to me"
and god said "i believe not in thee
but i persisted "give her to me"
don't ever love a girl
i tell thee(yourself)
at last she came to me
but of what purpose
it was time to end my life
and i had no reason to have her as my wife
and when she cried for me
i got up to see
in her tears the reflection of me!.
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are you 13!?!?!?really!. (doesn't look like after reading the poem)!.!.!.!.you have an extraordinary talent!.!.!.develop it!.!.!.!.BEST OF LUCK :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
no way, you're 13!?!? I don't believe you! That's a great poem! Not too sure about what line 5 means, but I don't really care because the rest of it is really good!. Good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wonderful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.!.!.
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The fact that you needed to put an adjective before your age tells us of your immaturity, hence your "love" poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yeah right you're 13!.
Thirteen year olds don't use thee!. Lmao!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very nicely written!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wisest is she who knows she does not know!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Its really good
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