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Question: Walls of pain [what do you think of my poem ] I wrote it!?
I walk theses halls of my soul so many doors open hands reach out the hands of fear and pain!. darkness!. lies!. what and how do I find , peace of mind my vains long to feel life again under my grave of dead !. I'm becoming ashes!. I feel cold longing for light to reach me I cry out I lay in my hollow grave forgoting and unloved!. sorrow eats at my bones!. this is my tomb I dwell within I walk the road of darkness I feel alive here blood runs thru lost I take my dark wings evil flows I'm forever undying a ghost to roam !. I breathe no more !. I'm lifeless in my world of suffering !.

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another beautiful poem from your collectionWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is quite a collection of profound glimpses into a thriving thematic imagination!. Through the dense steam of released enmity, there is a longing beauty, a living soul, filled with illuminating happiness buried six-feet below, coffined into the casket of loneliness and pain!.
This has to be one of my favorite reads!. Bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I know this isn`t you, your full of life and not dead!.
I know we all feel that way at times!. The poem is
great though!. I`ll be hollerin at ya!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How sad, well things can and do get better friend!. Www@QuestionHome@Com