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Question: What do you think of my French poem!? !?
"Nous avons été dehors en raison de mon incapacité à rester stable!. Je n'ai pas vous, mais jamais je ne vous laisser si vous me le permettez dans votre domaine encore peu!. Quoi qu'il en soit, je serai votre ami, et vous examiner le plus doux petit oiseau dans le parc!. Le , et continuera à prendre soin de vous!."

It is written for someone special, she was once my little sweetie and now just a friend!. Is it a real poem, or not much!? I think it has meaning!.

"We were owing to my inability outside to remain stable!. I have you, but never me to leave you if you allow it to me in your domain still not much!. Anyhow, I shall be your friend, and to examine you the softest small bird in the park!. And will continue looking after you!."

The original said: "We have been apart due to my inability to remain stable!. I have failed you, but I will never leave you if you allow me in your little realm again!. Either way, I will be your friend, and consider you the sweetest little bird in the park!. I still love, and will continue to care for you!."
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i love it!! its cute, specially that "bird in the park" bitWww@QuestionHome@Com

nice!.!.!.can't read French but niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Cute!. My problem with French is I can read it, hear it and comprehend it!. I just can't write or speak it well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com