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Question: Can you find peace in the!?
"Valley of the Shadow"
Watching the night, fading away,
relinquishing my heart and soul,
believing I will see the dawn
keeps me walking onward and through!.
I never though to be content,
watching the night, fading away!.
Once did I love the deep darkness,
now I crave the rays of the sun!.
At times I've been willingly blind,
following my black volition!.
Watching the night, fading away,
a new aura colors my soul!.
The songs of a new dawn rising,
finally I am breathing free!.
Awake, unconscious redemption,
watching the night, fading away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
sure!.
my quatern lesson may explain it!.!.
We would walk during the daylight
our hands grasping each finger,
discussing Nox's fire night!.
The warm day's heat overeager!.
In the Valley of the Shadow
we would walk during the daylight,
follow darkness in its corners,
squeezing hand grip match lip delight!.
The new color aura deepens
reds blues green purple black ripen!.
We would walk during the daylight,
dancing forward into pure night!.
Watching the day, waxing to stars,
tracing tiny sparkle soul lights!.
Deep darkness touching heart and soul,
we would walk during the daylight!.
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This is inspiring!. There is, indeed an exhilaration in a new dawn that awakens a shadowed soul!. I truly love that "a new aura colors (your) soul"!. I always try to remember that the sun, the light, never really goes down, the world just turns!. You have captured my heart and my imagination with your beautiful words!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Break forth Oh beauteous heavenly light"
This is a particularly wonderful hymn, it came to my mind reading this very good poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Watching the night, fading away,"
Such refrain was a good choice, fits the theme perfectly!.
Well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm glad for you if this is true, you are so deserving of the peace found in light!. Beautiful piece, peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
pl read my peace qs also thanks may peace be with uWww@QuestionHome@Com