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Question: Do you like my poem!?I think it's hot leave a comment lemme no what u think !?
he's slowly slipping away
from an b,c student
to a dude in his grave
he was striaght
and lived a decent life
although failed and took a grade twice
now he's out of school
and on the corner hustilin drugs
you ask him what he wanna be in life
he does'nt know ,he shrugs
but i know where he'll end up
if he keeps living the life he lives
dead or almost gone
with a baby
who has a sickening disese because of his drugs
Or maybe he'll turn his life around
flip it,360,turn it upside down
making his negatives a positive
doing right to all his wrongs
and keep pushing even though he can't move on
and although he has a baby he'll live life on
going to college and doing what's right
but know i'm hoping to far so let me step down from the light
we all know what to expect from him
and it's most likely nothing right
nothing but abuse and mismuse
he's young but not confused
he knows whats right and wrong
he knows when to stop and go on
but he continues you make the choices he makes
i can hope for him
but the hopes all gone
all i can say is brighten up and take the storm
or just do what you do
and be another lost cause
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its cool!. You should give it to who its about, maybe it will help them!. =) have an awesome rest of your day!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You need to use spell check!. It sounds more like the meanderings of a mind rather than a poem, not really following a style!. The story is entertaining!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

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