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Question: This is my poem!.!.!.wrote fast!.!.!.wut you think!?
Seasons change
Leaves fall
Emotions remain
Hearts wave in the wind
Like that last leaf
Clinging on
Hoping to adhere
Forever
To that branch
Wavering, flaying in the wind
There is no hope
Surely it will fall off
Decay
Its matter forever remaining
Helping the soil
Bring about new life
New love
But in all its glory that
Last leaf was fabulous
A perilous, yet beautiful creation
It remained until the tree couldn’t bear
Couldn’t hold its minuscule weight
Any longer
It fell
And was whisked away
By the hesitant wind
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this is incredible! i swear it seems like a year to write this!.!.!.you must really be gifted!.!.!.lucky!.!.!.i love it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

but what shall i show

I see more with my eyes closed

i hear better whn im alone

i sense my self whn i feel the dark pain

a man, ain't supposed to cry but im shy

but why im having tears in my eyes

And with God, as my witness

This I swear to you

With all my heart, I do promise

PAin WIll BE always ma pain

Let someone Somebody wake me down

I'm falling from my heart

im bleeding from my soul

Somebody help me!

But NO 1 is there jst my forzen train!.

And again

These days, coming off as empty page

Lonely sure Forever something

But deep in my soul

I'm praying for mercy

Dear lord save me and end me !.

how nothing ever stays the same

Helpless

Never knowing whom to blame

my heart my fate or the flame

once was a time

when my heart , was something worth fighting for

But now HOpefully luck stand next to me !.!.

Love Honest respect

Im gonna be all my life yours
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