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Question: I reworked this a bit!.!. do you recognize it!?
Damselfly wafted slowly across the horizon
Of my half opened eyes as I lay in the sun
She fluttered and settled on the edge of my glass!.
As she rested her wings in indecision

I raised my eyelids-vision clearing,
With passive curiosity to study this vision
As I took in her beauty - this apparition
I wondered silently
As she was looking at me

What do the eyes of a damselfly see!?
Was this one seriously studying me!?
Then as smoothly as she came to me
Wings fluttered, silently
It seemed as though she winked at me
As away she flew, flamboyant and free
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I don't recognize the poem, but I recognize the damselfly!. She looks much like sweetheart I once had!.
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S-J stands for stupid jerk Madd!.!.!. ok!? never mind the comment!.!. it was a waste of his or her dads sperm to donate it to the egg that became !.!.!.!.I will apologize for " it!.!."
I think that poem is cool Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I recognize this poem!. At the first time, I thought I 'd be a good subject for a cartoonist, or something like that!.
Well put!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I remember from the previous poem before rework that you were close to the water!. This is much better! Absolutely lovely!Www@QuestionHome@Com

How Beautiful this vision, If only we could have such
Wings!. Dreams me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

waste of my 2 and half minutes, this is crap!.Www@QuestionHome@Com