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Question: Why has this poem not had a glance my fans and well wishers please have a look MY POEM for you!?
MY POEM FOR YOU

Poetry is emotion,
An outcome of commotion
From the fathoms of the heart
And depths of the ocean
For the surf it must traverse
The winds slapping too
Of hurricanes and its wile mess
Of fire too
Storm within a storm
Yes in living human form
That is what Kroshta will say,
If you may,
Have more metaphors Vision,
Widen your own vision!.

I pray do teach me what is
Metre what is rhyme,
All I know is metro
And have just no time
For the last wording
In a syllable cry
Try, try, just try
And with end of a new sentence
Let it match with a fry, a fly or my, my!.

What is poetry!?
But a random piece of art,
For beginners let us start ,
With criticism , condemnation
And assault
No, not, it’s not your fault
Its all but normal worldly phenomena,
Of ability assassination, poetic drama!.

What then is poetry may I ask!?
Picking up a phrase here
And a syllable there
Put on a Poeter’s mask and say
How did I my poem display!?
That’s the poets true art!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
first of all thanks for including me in your poetry love im flattered :)

nice work and you didnt ryhme much more metaphors
my favorite part:
"In a syllable cry
Try, try, just try
And with end of a new sentence
Let it match with a fry, a fly or my, my!.

What is poetry!?
But a random piece of art,
For beginners let us start ,
With criticism , condemnation
And assault
No, not, it’s not your fault
Its all but normal worldly phenomena,
Of ability assassination, poetic drama!."

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wow!!!!!!! you are getting so good girl,
keep writing VISION !
have a great one xoxWww@QuestionHome@Com

This poem describes everything wrong with Internet poetry, from misconception to misinterpretation!. English is not the only language of poetry and Yahoo! Poetry (for the most part) is not about artistic pursuit!. This is a shout-out, shouting at its audience!. No wonder it sits and waits!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

To answer your question!.!.!.

1) Because it is cr*p!.

2) Because you have posted it before, several times, as you do with all your toe-curling efforts!.

3) Because you are clearly mad!.

Hope this helps!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are you shouting at me!?

I found ten words in this that were great, when arranged differently!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow thats pretty good but not every other line has to rhime Www@QuestionHome@Com

By asking what poetry is in this setting, you have wasted your valuable time!. That is equivalent to going into a boathouse full of anchors and asking them the secret of floating! What would they know of it!.!.!.!? You see, I have been observing Y!A Poetry for quite some time now!. The participants fall into a number of distinct groups: you have your angst-ridden teens, who have no idea what they are saying or doing, by and large; you have your recovering alcoholics and drug abusers (and some who have no intention of recovering!); you have your bored hobbyists who are looking for a social outlet (they call themselves Poets of Mars, a planet that will remain arid after they "arrive"); you have your adherents to classical form (those of mediocre talent are grudgingly embraced, those much better are habitually shunned); and you have your critics, very few in number, who coincidentally all write fine poetry, understand the craft deeply, and have something to say (they are ridiculed and shunned)!. Where do you feel you fit in!? You may belong to more than one group, if you meet the "qualifications!." If you want to write well and be appreciated, you should probably look elsewhere because the "poets" of this realm quite frankly could not discern the difference between a burp and a Horation ode!. If you want to write mindless tripe, then go to Mars and be amongst your peers; it is my understanding they will be blasting off (or perhaps jacking off) soon!. This is not the home of poetry, or the province of intellectuals, but rather a mob of poor dumb SOBs who want to chat with their friends and avoid paying the long distance charges!. Your are in the wilderness, and the voice you hear is a solitary one that cries out to you and tells you the full and unvarnished truth!.!.!. will you listen!. Peace be with you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com