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Question: I havent written in a while!.!.!. and i thought i'd see what people thought!.!?
so what do you think!?


I know of this girl,
I think I love,
She's out of this world
Into the stars and above!.

She told me once,
Just wasn't right,
I was fun,
And not like other guys!.

She tipped back my head,
And closed her eyes,
And what she whispered,
Took me by surprise!.

And then somehow my lips found hers
and somehow i was taken back
Somehow without a word
Somehow, somehow, she kissed me back!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Aww!
I thought it was really good!.
Fantastic work!.
Amazed and inspired!.
That was awesome!
I looooved it!.
=]Www@QuestionHome@Com

awww emron your writing has REALLY matured! I love it ALL *except (you know me, i can't NOT find something wrong)* i don't like you rhyming back with back in the last stanza =]

lovely poem darling, simply lovely!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's really good, it sounds like you never stopped writing :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

awe tats so cute lol you should share your poems with that girl you like lolWww@QuestionHome@Com