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Question: Heres another poem i wrote!?
Love

A simple four letter word,
That is often over used!.
But baby when I say it to you it's meant to last forever <3
I love you!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
no offense but is a bit cheesy!. You should make it sound like you are really in love and talking to the reader!. Include something special that's not in other poems or rhyme!.such as i love you more than words can say, i love you more than yesterday!.You are my whole world and you mean everything to me!. Make the reader feel special, make it a bit soppy but it is quite good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com