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Question: Does Love loom as a monster!?
In timeless consequence, we are
Connected metronomically—
Our footsteps echo vibrant pulse
In this our dance, most intimate!.
Alone on crowded city streets,
We walk together, leaning in
Until our bodies merge as one—
An eight- limbed diety are we,
Immortal and impervious
To all unkind philosophies!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Wow, great!. Its as beautiful as it is philosophical!. I agree that love in its most purest form, when two people combine their love into one, it can withstand all tests of time, even death!. Love is immortal, much like this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Hi AMY G
Really a visual art always remain in your expertise!.I like your thoughts!. You have right to be appriciated!.With your permission let
me to continue further from my Urdu Poem (Translation):-
It was lost, around its orbit, in zoom,
I have brought the heart back, in its home !.
Zakir RanjhaWww@QuestionHome@Com
Lovely poem, but monster!? I guess it could be a monster at times, I know it can tame the most ferocious, or turn timid people into heroes and more!. Love is the driving force of all mankind, whether we want to acknowledge that or not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Lady, Sweet Lady, Do your tears belong to me"!.
A John Denver song!. He sings about their bodies becoming entwined as one!. Sorry I am not side tracking, your words bought this song back to me!.
I Love both!. Thank you!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Now that was cool! I generally don't care for Love poems, but that was good!. The "An eight- limbed diety are we," give me a chill, and that uneasy feeling "I wish I'd wrote that line" creeps through my mind!.
Good stuff, be well all!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Loved the eight limbed line!. Don't know why it stuck out but it did!. Very vivid and great use of wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com
depends upon your perspective and perceptionWww@QuestionHome@Com
The books are still being written!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Now, you did something special!. This may be your best poem yet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow i liked that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A very interesting poem it has my mind working!.!.!.thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com