What do you think of another Ocean poem inspired!.!.!.!?
by Elaine's post
http://au!.answers!.yahoo!.com/question/ind!.!.!.Where Man and Ocean meet
by Jellz Fisher 081013
Tread softly to the water’s edge
o’er silken grains of time!.
Leave shifting prints, shadowy pairs
upon the shore sublime
Creep up to touch the lapping tide,
pray silence if you please
and simply stand in wondered awe
at surging vibrant seas
As briny kisses caress the shore,
so let your skin embrace,
refreshing touch of oceans vast
wind salty 'pon your face
Listen to the voice of old,
men have striven to command!.
At one you are with sea and shore,
this moment where you stand!.
Tread softly to the water’s edge,
where sands of time will wait!.
Shift gently there beneath your feet
and guide you to Neptune’s gate!.
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I like this poem, its really good!.
All the imagery inserted in this poem is really effective!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
An excellent poem, also very sensual!. We are Ocean!. Our own tides rise with the full moon!. Many poetic devices used, including alternate rhyming and almost perfect meter, put this poem in the major leagues!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love the soft rhyming and sensuality!. A beautiful poem! You, Elaine and Dondi have started a "Day at the Beach" Monday!. I decided to come along!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A very nice flow!. Great first stanza!. Stanza four needs addressing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is very soothing and I love the visual of footprints fading in the sand!.
My opinion!? I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com