This is a poem i wrote for a friend please tell me what you think?

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You sit there and begin to think!.
Of all the moments in life!.
Only a few were reallly happy!.
And you see now that no matter what!.
You cant relive those moments!.
For life has taken a turn!.
Now everything is gone!.
The people you loved dissapeared!.
Gone like a summer day!.
Erased from exicstance!.
You finally are alone!.
Wishing everyone would come back!.
As you feel a tear roll down your cheek!.
You have finaly hit rock bottom!.
Everything you knew is gone!.
The sad truth has snuck up on you!.
For your wheaping!. Cheer up!. Your not alone!.
Look around there are new people!.
We love you so please be happy!.
We might not show it well but we do!.
We want to keep you safe and make u feel loved!.
Sorry if were a little mean!. We dont mean to be!.
Just dont give up!. Everything will be alright!.
For you have us !.!. and Always will !.!.!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's beautiful!. I think it was just so insightful!. You're such an artistic person!. I also love poetry!. I know your friend will love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The content is beautiful!. I have issues with the punctuation though because the periods after every line isolates everything!.

For example the first two lines:
!.!.!."You sit there and begin to think!. Of all the moments in life!."!.!.!.
Would be more effective as one thought rather than two separated thoughts:
!.!.!."You sit there and begin to think of all the moments in life!."!.!.!.
And:
!.!.!."Sorry if we were a little mean!. We didn't mean to be!." !.!.!.
would sound more natural as:
!.!.!."Sorry if we were a little mean, we didn't mean to be!."!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com