I'm 12 and i have to turn this in tomarrow !.
i just wantted to see how it sounds so far i think im finished and i'm waiting for an opinion!.!.thanks
My Grandparents Special Gifts
Paint me a picture Yayo,
one that will last forever
Fine yellow streaks of sunlight,
with clouds that are fluffy and white!.
Guide my hand and help me through
The painting process as you do!.
For this moment I cherish in my heart
Your precious gift from God for art
Bake me a cake Yaya
One with senses that can't be replaced
With a vanilla aroma surrounding us,
And creamy milk that shines with lust
Direct me while stirring the bowl,
To cleaning the kitchen high and low
for this I will surely treasure
Your precious talents of homemade pleasures
Tell me a story Abuelo,
one that can be passed on for generations
telling theses sentences and phrases,
leaves me thinking and amazes!.
Teaching me choices good and bad
Looking up to you because you're never mad,
For this gift is awarded first place,
Your precious gift of being friendly with grace
Sew me a dress Abuela,
one with linens that I won't forget
work the machine and watch your foot tap
while I'm sitting upon your lap!.
Steer me while patching complicated quilts,
To knitting a hat and see how it’s being built!.
Each stitch with kindness and love,
Your precious talents of hand-work from above
All my grandparents have a special gift I adore,
I couldn’t ask for anything more!.
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